Sunday, 26 September 2010


.. My Opinion ..


I partially agree…because…so


Government should pay for healthcare for the country's citizens.


I partially agree with the above statement because the citizens who are the members of the society who are the country, work in the country to be great community, they will fight for it, pay tax to support it and protect the country from anything it will happen, like a war or disaster. So the point is. If you want to get something you should pay the price. The government should open free hospitals and clinics for all the citizens.



Thank you for read my writing…
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4 comments:

  1. Amro26 September 2010 at 5:58 pm

    there are a lot of idea in one sentence you really need to organized them


    well done

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  2. Ali26 September 2010 at 6:04 pm

    Hi man, you have good ideas, but you need to
    organize it.

    it's missed up

    my greetings

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  3. Marcus27 September 2010 at 3:00 pm

    Maybe something like this:

    I partially agree with the above statement because a country's people work to make it a great community. They will fight and protect it from anything, like a war or disaster. Also they pay taxes. So in my opinion, the government should open free hospitals and clinics for all the citizens.


    Notice how each sentence has a single message.

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  4. Classroom blog27 September 2010 at 6:38 pm

    Hi Bader,
    A very nice blog, but you need to put it into English formatting. This right to left typing is very confusing. Marcus and your classmates have made some good suggestions

    Hilary.

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